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The #Write #Words? Post 8

Looking at Onomatopoeia and Metaphor, Simile, Collective Nouns, and my Delusional Dictionary. For definitions of those, click here to read the introductory post to the series.

This week’s words: Pitter-patter, as poor as, Pod, Psychiatrist.

Onomatopoeia: Pitter-patter:

We’re probably all familiar with the ‘pitter-patter’ of tiny feet; a reference to the sound a toddler’s bare feet make on a hard surface. And the same word is used to describe gentle rainfall. We wouldn’t, of course, use it to describe the sound of clog dancers, galloping horses, or hailstone hitting a corrugated iron roof.

But are there different, equally effective ways to bring to life the specific noise made by those bare feet? We could try ‘the slap, slap, slap of bare feet across a wooden floor’, but that could equally apply to adult movement. Sometimes, a word is used consistently because no other word describes an action quite as accurately or evocatively. I suspect that’s the case here. Unless, of course, you can suggest something better?

Simile: as poor as:

Poverty is a worldwide issue, but ‘as poor as a church mouse’ restricts the phrase to Christian communities. Dirt is as ubiquitous as poverty, so ‘poor as dirt’ is acceptable regardless of the society or community in question. Are there better similes that don’t rely on regional or cultural references? In the UK, for example, we could use ‘poor as a benefit claimant’, but this could cause some dispute, as there are people who truly believe (mistakenly) that claimants of social benefits are actually better off than workers. Also, there are nations where such benefits are unheard of. How about, ‘poor as a beggar’, ‘poor as an orphan waif’, ‘poor as a slum-dweller’, ‘poor as Bob Cratchit’? Of course, the last one requires the reader’s knowledge of the character from Charles Dickens’ ‘A Christmas Carol’, and I suspect there would be objections to the other suggestions, as well. Perhaps you can come up with something more appropriate?

Similes to avoid because they’re clichés?

as poor as a church mouse, poor as dirt

Collective Nouns: Pod

pod of dolphins, peas, porpoises, seals, walruses, whales, whiting.

Anything else come in pods? Beans and most other pulses, though the peas seem to have bagged the imagination here. How about a ‘pod of podiatrists’, maybe a ‘pod of paediatricians’, or perhaps a ‘pod of popes’?

Delusional Dictionary: Psychiatrist: an individual whose mental problems are transferred to the patient to boost the confidence of the practitioner; someone who believes everyone is in need of their services, regardless of evidence; a person deeply influenced by the theories of pseudo-scientists in the same field.

For those learning English as a language, there’s a useful guide to pronunciation here, and Facebook hosts a great group you can join here.

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2 Responses to “The #Write #Words? Post 8”

  1. Darlene

    Would poor as an orphan work? I guess not all modern day orphans are poor. Poor as a man recently divorced would be more 21 century and many could relate.

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    • stuartaken

      Ah, Darlene, that’s why I added the emotive ‘waif’, and, of course, it’s the image that the expression creates for readers that matters. Most people associate orphans with poverty, I think. As for your recently divorced man, I suspect that’s dependent on local context. Poverty in such cases is generally relative rather than absolute. But I bet it would find favour in certain quarters, so, as is so often the case, it all depends on context and the readership expected.
      Thanks for the comment.

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